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Editing for Conciseness (Unnecessary Modifiers) [LO-3] Remove all the unnecessary modifiers from… 1 answer below »

Editing for Conciseness (Unnecessary Modifiers) [LO-3] Remove all the unnecessary modifiers from… 1 answer below »

Editing for Conciseness (Unnecessary Modifiers) [LO-3] Remove all the unnecessary modifiers from these sentences:
 a. Tremendously high pay increases were given to the extraordinarily skilled and extremely conscientious employees.
 b. Th e union’s proposals were highly inflationary, extremely demanding, and exceptionally bold.