Quick revison on an already written paper.

Quick revison on an already written paper.

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i need a quick revision. please correct the CSR essay.

Instructions say: You are not required or expected to use materials other than assigned course readings, and you are expected to make use of all readings that are relevant to the points you are making. The readings assigned for lectures 15-19 will be most directly applicable. Skilfully incorporating concepts from other units of the course (such as those relevant to the first assignment, and on normative CSR debates) is a plus, but avoid padding the paper with undigested or weakly integrated material.

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