Laney College Fresh Produce and Unprocessed Food in Bayview Discussion

Laney College Fresh Produce and Unprocessed Food in Bayview Discussion

Please help me to editing it.

The structure of the sentence and the entire article. Especially at the beginning and the first paragraph, here are my professor’s comments, please follow these changes. The rest can be modified with reference to the teacher’s previous comments on the last two pages.

But still require 5-8 sentences per paragraph.