ENG101 Ashford University African American Suspensions in School Paper

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ENG101 Ashford University African American Suspensions in School Paper

I am back as promised. Attached you will find my feedback with  omissions and suggestions from my TA. Due to may complaints and  misunderstandings the criteria has been changed. Here is the new  required headings

Abstract- no longer needed.

Lit Review 2-3 pages with 3 references

Conceptual Frame work 1 page with a Bio-psycho social subheading 1 page

Methods  – Measurement section stating its a quantitative study( NO statistics)  this should be a description of each variable( Age, ethnicity, education  level and gender) African American Males ages 13-21. 1 paraphrase only. 

Under methods section there should be a Sampling and Eligibility Criteria.  This sampling should list who or what you are studying to collect the  data such. Is it secondary data analysis and how did you recruit. EG.  This a random sampling of the local school districts data base of high  school students who identify as African American males ages 13-21.

Eligibility criteria should be 3-4 sentences max and simply state how these sample qualified for this study.

Last heading should be Data Collection/Design not Conclusion. No conclusion is needed! 

It  should read something along the lines of; This cross sectional study  used data collection surveys. These surveys were completed on IPAds with  the assistance of a research assistance in focus roues of 8-10 African  American male HS students grades 9-12. A secondary data source should be  used and mentioned  2 paragraphs max.