Below is the response from my Instructor from Milestone 1, also i have included Milestone 2 rubric with it:
IT 210 Milestone One Rubric feedback: Dear Lucky
Milestone One was worth a total of 100 points.
As mentioned in earlier announcements and emails, it is important to address each part of the Milestone One Rubric individually and in detail.
I gave some formatting ideas to help ensure that all parts of the rubric were addressed but it was not required that you follow my formatting suggestions.
If you did not earn full credit for a specific section of the rubric, I have added comments under that section.
Please make improvements based on my comments so you can get full credit when you apply Milestone One to the Final Project.
General Comments: Your Milestone One included some good content but some important sections were skipped.
Following the recommended formatting would ensure that you do not miss any of the key requirements.
You should use the Final Project Template and be sure to use APA formatting.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Please see the comments for the following Rubrics:
Introduction: State the Problem: Please describe the problem in more detail in the Final Project. Provide specific information about the business in question and not just businesses in general.
Introduction: Two Technologies: This topic should have a header and paragraph of its own. It should not be combined with other sections of the paper.
Specifically define the two technologies you chose.
Business Requirements: Objectives: More detail needed for objectives. This topic should have a header and paragraph of its own. It should not be combined with other sections of the paper.
Business Requirements: Project Description: I could not find the project description. This topic should have a header and paragraph of its own. It should not be combined with other sections of the paper.
Business Requirements: Technological Requirements: Technology requirements should include a discussion of software, hardware, and or cloud-based requirements.
Competitors and Technology: Technology One: I could not find this section regarding competitors.
Competitors and Technology: Technology Two: I could not find this section regarding competitors.
Competitors and Technology: Benefitting From Technology: I could not find this section regarding competitors benefiting.
Articulation of Response: Due to the lack of formatting, this paper was difficult to read. Please use the Final Project template.
This assignment is the second milestone that you will complete for your final project. This is an important practice opportunity to draft this section now and get instructor feedback that will help you improve upon your final submission. This is graded differently than the final project given this is a practice opportunity. Review the rubric for full details.
If you have not already reviewed your feedback from your instructor on Milestone One do so now. Make any corrections or adjustments to improve upon that section of your draft so that you are working from good premises before beginning this Milestone which depends on that information.
To complete this assignment, review the Milestone Two Guidelines and Rubric document below and also follow the Final project template.